Personal Statement & University Admissions Coaching
Personal Statement & University Admissions Coaching
Senior-led coaching that helps students turn their real experiences into a personal statement, application and interview answers an admissions officer actually remembers, whatever route they apply through.
When every applicant looks impressive, the clearest story wins. Most students simply list activities, and the reader forgets them. We help each student find the one thread that runs through their subjects, activities and choices, and turn it into evidence an admissions officer can actually picture.
Find Your Thread
A structured method we’ve delivered to students in Hong Kong schools, distilled into three moves.
Find your thread
- Not “passionate and hardworking”
- A real question you keep asking, one a reader can follow across two very different programme choices
Evidence it
- STAR-style, specific, results-based
- “Make me picture it”, a scene, an action, a result, not adjectives
Make it fit
- JUPAS OEA, personal statement, interview
- One true story, reusable for the next five years
Whatever route you apply through
JUPAS, non-JUPAS, or overseas, the method is the same. We tailor it to your route.
Personal Statement & OEA
- The optional 500-word personal statement, done well
- Up to 10 OEA entries across the eight categories
- The part most local students struggle with, coached line by line
Direct & International Applications
- Direct applications to HK universities (non-JUPAS route)
- International-curriculum students (IB, A-Level and others)
- The personal statement each of these still needs
UCAS & US Applications
- UCAS (UK) personal statement
- US Common App personal essay
- Course-fit and programme research
Interviews & Scholarships
- The 45-second “tell me about yourself”
- Panel questions and mock interviews
- Scholarship and admissions interviews
How coaching works
One-on-one, senior-led, tailored to each student. We take a limited number of students each admissions cycle.
Personal Statement & OEA Coaching
- Discover your thread
- Build your evidence bank
- Draft your statement & OEA entries
- Reviewed and refined line by line
Interview & Scholarship Prep
- Mock interviews & panel questions
- The 45-second answer
- Scholarship and programme interviews
Is this you?
Dr. Stephanie Fan
Co-founder, Envision Academy
Coaching is led personally by Dr. Fan, who designed the “Find Your Thread” method and delivers it in Hong Kong schools.
- Managing Director & Chief Investment Officer of an asset management company
- Adjunct Professor at a local university
- Doctorate, Master’s and Bachelor’s in finance
- Over 10 years teaching at local & overseas universities, with experience as an interview panellist
Book a free 30-minute consultation
We take a limited number of students each admissions cycle. Tell us your year and where you’re applying, and we’ll see whether we’re the right fit.
個人陳述及升學輔導
由資深導師親自指導，助學生把真實經歷化成個人陳述、申請與面試答問，寫出讓收生老師記得住的故事，不論你循哪條途徑申請。
當每位申請人看起來都很出色，最清晰的故事才會勝出。大部分學生只是把活動一項一項列出，收生老師轉眼便忘記。我們幫每位學生找出貫穿其選科、活動與選擇的那一條「線」，再把它化成收生老師能夠想像得到的實證。
Find Your Thread：找出你的主線
一套已於香港中學實踐的系統方法，濃縮成三個步驟。
找出你的主線
- 不是「有熱誠、肯努力」
- 而是一個你不斷追問的真實問題，能讓讀者在兩個截然不同的選科之間看到同一個你
用實證支撐
- STAR 結構、具體、有成果
- 「讓我想像得到」，一個場景、一個行動、一個結果，而非形容詞
對準讀者
- JUPAS OEA、個人陳述、面試
- 一個真實故事，未來五年都用得上
不論你循哪條途徑申請
JUPAS、非 JUPAS 或海外，方法一樣，我們因應你的途徑調整。
個人陳述及 OEA
- 那份選填的 500 字個人陳述，寫得出色
- 八大類別、最多 10 項的 OEA 條目
- 本地學生最感頭痛的部分，逐句指導
直接及國際課程申請
- 以非 JUPAS 途徑直接申請本地大學
- 國際課程學生（IB、A-Level 等）
- 這些途徑同樣需要的個人陳述
UCAS 及美國申請
- UCAS（英國）個人陳述
- 美國 Common App 個人文章
- 選科配對與課程研究
面試及獎學金
- 45 秒的「介紹一下你自己」
- 評審提問與模擬面試
- 獎學金及收生面試
輔導怎樣進行
一對一、由資深導師主理、因材施教。每個收生周期只收取有限名額。
個人陳述及 OEA 輔導
- 找出你的主線
- 建立你的實證庫
- 撰寫個人陳述及 OEA 條目
- 逐句檢視、反覆打磨
面試及獎學金準備
- 模擬面試及評審提問
- 45 秒自我介紹
- 獎學金及課程面試
這是你嗎？
Dr. Stephanie Fan
Envision Academy 聯合創辦人
輔導由范博士親自主理。她設計了「Find Your Thread」方法，並於香港中學親自任教。
- 資產管理公司董事總經理兼首席投資官
- 本地大學客座教授
- 金融學博士、碩士及學士
- 逾十年於本地及海外大學任教，並具面試評審經驗
預約 30 分鐘免費諮詢
每個收生周期只收取有限名額。告訴我們你的年級和升學方向，我們會一起看看是否合適。